Tuesday, February 28, 2012

orange&blue.


1/60, 5.6, 800

1/125, 5.0, 400.

1/60, 5.6, 800

14 comments:

JRN 236 said...

- All three photos could have used some bolding up. They were kind of dull.

- I like the different patterns in the third photo.

- I like that the books are not all the same direction but the background could have been blurred out more.

Unknown said...

I really enjoy the simplicity of the first photo. I also really like how the subject of the second photo is really well defined. I did not like how busy the last photo appears to be because of the different patters and textures going on.

JRN 236 said...

- I like the angle on the first one.

- I also like the contrast of blue, orange and then blue with the bird in the third one.

- I think I would have like the second one more if the books were orange, blue, orange, or had more of a pattern among the colors.

JRN 236 said...

I think the color in the first photo is a little muted.
I love the different colors in the quilt, but my eyes still go to the bird first.
I love how the angles in the first photograph are different

JRN 236 said...

1. I really like that you contrasted blue and orange in each photo, but different shades in each one.
2. The orange in the Tide photo really stands out against the light blue, and I like that the photo has what seems to be a purpose of marketing.
3. The third photo had good patterns and texture, but there was a lot in the photo that distracted me from the color contrast.

JRN 236 said...

I liked how the second photo you made the books dominant and made other things B & W.
The photos could have been a little brighter.
I like how you used different angles in all three shots.

JRN 236 said...

I really like the clean composition your angle creates in the first photo. It almost looks like an ad. Middle photo is also clean, playing on the lines of the books, although I almost want to see one more element (perhaps an orange?) to change up the shape and texture. Third photo is pretty yellow, I'm guessing due to your light source.
-Emily

JRN 236 said...

The colors in the first are good, but could be a bit bolded.
The second picture is cool, i like the leading lines of the books.
The third picture is fun because of the repeated pattern

JRN 236 said...

Try boosting the colors of the first photo. It is a really interesting photograph and well done, but the red/orange of the container against that baby blue could be more dramatic.

Good balance with the second photograph.

Maybe a bit of a distracting background though.

JRN 236 said...

I really like the subject and composition in the 3rd picture, very interesting/cool.

The colors in the 1st picture could be more rich or saturated a little more.

The angle of the 1st photo is unique, I like it.

JRN 236 said...

-all three photos seem a little muted. i would like to see more contrast

-i like the message you convay in the first photo

- the second photo has a nice blur in the background

JRN 236 said...

I loved the subject of the third photo.
I love the lines in the second photo.
I feel that the colors weren't vibrant enough.

JRN 236 said...

I really like the colors throughout.
I love the angle you shot on the first photo.
The third picture could use some brightening up.

JRN 236 said...

I really like the subject matter in the third photo.

The contrasting colors are very easily detected in you first two photos.

I feel like your photos were really rushed. It seemed like you were trying to make something out of nothing. Maybe take more time to take your photos.