Tuesday, April 3, 2012

Relationship & Final Proofs


f.5 1/80 ISO 400





10 comments:

JRN 236 said...

i really like how the photo gradually goes from blurry to clear.
I think that the colors are a little bit muted

JRN 236 said...

I like how the 2 people are laughing and the moment is captured well. It could use a little white balance. (it is a little orange)

JRN 236 said...

I like how you got both of them laughing

skin tones in the face look a little off

JRN 236 said...

Bryce, I really like this shot. It is great. I actually really like the composition. Try and see what you can to to balance your reds. The faces may be a bit too red.

JRN 236 said...

I like how you have layering.
It's just a little hard to define the relationship they have.

JRN 236 said...

- I like the muted tones
- I wish I could have seen both faces clearly.

JRN 236 said...

I love the moment captured in this photo!
Might look better if the hands were less blurry

JRN 236 said...

I like the relationship that you decided to display, it's very different from others.
I think it's cool how the front face is blurry and the back face is clear.
It still looks like the color balance is a bit off.

JRN 236 said...

I love the emotion shown in the photo. and i find it interesting that the man in front is not focused but then the man behind him is.
i almost don't know where my eyes are drawn though.

JRN 236 said...

This is a great moment that was captured, wait to be on your toes.

I think the guy closest is too grainy/blurry.